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hello christmas,
today is christmas and i wish i want a celphone i said to my mom "moomy will you give me a celphone in christmas?"mom said 'i think so dear maybe when we had moneys then i can buy you" but when i woke up this morning i saw a gift written;to:dorothy from your best parents then i opened the gift so i said "thank you mom" she said "your welcome are you happy?" i told "yes i am" the end

Santa’s Helpers

Written by: Katy
Starring Santa and the gang from Riverdale
December 23, 2007
Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleigh bells. He answered it. “Hello…” “Archie! I need help. Quick, round up your friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.” “Who is this?” said Archie. “Santa!” Archie started to laugh, and then heard a noise outside. He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer! “Jumping Jingle Bells!” He shouted and then put his hand to his mouth thinking of his parents fast asleep. He decided to call Betty first. “U-u hello?” Betty asked sleepily. “Betty, wake up! I need your help, actually Santa needs our help. He’s out here on my lawn.” Betty was wide awake by this time. “Oh my gosh! I’ll get dressed and call Ronnie, you call Jughead and Reggie.” “Gotcha! Bye!” Ten minutes later the whole gang was assembled sleepily on Archie’s lawn. Dumbstruck as they slowly woke up to find themselves face to face with Santa. “Thanks for coming kids. I have to ask a favor of you. A rather large favor at that.” “Sure Santa we’d be glad to help you. All you have to do is ask.” Jughead said nodding. “I’ll be glad to help as long as there is some reward involved.” Reggie said, “Maybe the ten best looking chicks in Riverdale tied up with a bow.” “Oh Reggie Betty said. “ I don’t think you’ll ever know the real meaning of Christmas” “We will see about the reward later, right now we need to go to the North Pole. Everything is chaos! The elves are on strike and the toys aren’t done, the sleigh isn’t loaded and the reindeer are tired as well as I think someone is sabotaging the North Pole!” “Sabotage the North Pole?” The gang asked in unison, “Who would sabotage the North Pole?” “How should I know?” Santa said, “A competitor? Who knows? Hop on!” Betty and Veronica sat directly behind Santa Archie, Reggie and Jughead sat behind them, and off they went traveling into the dark nighttime sky.
It had begun to snow but the gang didn’t notice it. They were so enraptured by the trip they didn’t stop looking over the edge of sleigh down on the neighborhoods with the brightly decorated houses till they landed with a bump at the North Pole. “Whoa, way cool.” Archie commented, his face bathed in red and green light flooding the snow from the open doorway. “Groovy.” Jughead said as he hopped off the sleigh. Faintly they could hear Christmas music playing from somewhere in the vast expanse of village and factories they could see. “Well hello there.” Came a slimy voice from the doorway, “Nick said he’d scrounge up some help somewhere.” They all turned around to face… a rather large, handsome elf with pointed ears wearing a sharp blue jacket covered with dangling gold buttons everywhere! “This is Robert O’ Neel.” Mrs. Claus said as she too entered the doorway, “He is one of the only elves that didn’t go on strike. We’re very thankful for that, Robert.”“Wow! We are so happy to meet you.” Betty and Veronica gushed looking directly at Robert. “Come on Come on!” Santa called as he leaped nimbly off the sleigh, “There is much work to done. Archie, Reggie, and Jughead follow me. Betty and Veronica, Mrs. Claus will show you to the reindeer.” “Reindeer?” Veronica asked, “What are we doing with the reindeer?” “You my dearies, get to relax the reindeer.” Mrs. Claus. answered walking toward the stables a large, red building at least three stories high. They walked onward a little puzzled, “Relax the reindeer what do mean Mrs. Claus?” “There is only one way for a reindeer to relax, by massaging their tired joints and muscles in warm soapy water. Luckily for you we had the elves install for Jacuzzis before they quit.” “Holy reindeer!” Veronica exclaimed as her eyes adjusted to the sudden brightness of the barn, seeing two layers of reindeer stalls. “Yes we have quite a few reindeer. When flying, Nick needs to come back here and exchange reindeer. Since the Magical Animal treatment act of 2007 we need to have twenty-seven reindeer to make sure the reindeer don’t get overworked. I’ll leave you to your devices. Have fun!” Mrs. Claus said as she walked back toward the house. “Now just you wait a second, if you think we’ll be washing these rein-” Veronica shouted toward Mrs. Claus but was silenced by Betty putting her and over Veronica’s mouth and clamping down firmly. “Just think of all the little children and kids you’ll be helping by doing this monumental chore.” Betty coaxed. Veronica stayed rigid. “Just think of how impressed Robert will be.” Betty tried again. Veronica slowly relaxed and nodded. “Good now let’s start washing, you take the first floor and I’ll take the second.”

Meanwhile,

Archie, Reggie and Jughead were assigned various tasks. Archie and Reggie were assigned to doll manufacture and Jughead was sent to the kitchen to help Mrs. Claus make taffy for the kids. “Why does spindle snoot get the soft, cushy job of making taffy while we have to make dolls?” grumbled Reggie. “Oh quit your griping would you rather have stayed home in bed and missed all this?” Archie asked as he painted the eye of a Victorian doll. “I guess not.” Reggie admitted, “But, I will expect something in return. It’s only fair for Santa to give me something in return for being torn out of my nice warm bed, surrounded by my pictures. Ah, could life get any better?” Reggie theoretically asked. “It won’t if you don’t hurry up and quit daydreaming.” Archie said, “If you don’t speed up with that, these dolls won’t be done till 2010!”

With Jughead,

“Now remember, Mrs. Claus instructed Jughead. The Taffy needs to be placed in plastic wrappers like so.” She said demonstrating how to flip a taffy ball into the plastic, twist the ends and place a “Merry Christmas” sticker on it. “Nothing to it. Now you try.” Jughead proceeded to take a ball of taffy place it in the plastic and twist the ends, but as he twisted the ends the small ball of Red taffy flew into the air and ‘SPLAT’ on the opposite wall. “Uh...not quite.” Mrs. Claus said kindly. “It’s like this.” She said, demonstrating in slow motion the operation of taffy packaging. “Looks easy enough.” Jughead admitted grabbing a ball of taffy. Flip, twist, and once again the ball of taffy flew towards the wall and ‘SPLAT’ next to the other. “Oh well, you’ll get it eventually, just keep at it.” Mrs. Claus told Jughead, “I’ll be making sugar cookies. When you’re done you can eat some if you wish. That sped Jughead up. After ten tries and ten fails Jughead finally produced one wrapped taffy. Hmm, maybe if I pretend these are hamburgers it would help. After that mental image of hamburgers flipping it only took five minutes for Jughead to finish. “Hello cookies, here I come.”

Betty and Veronica had almost finished washing all but 2 reindeer when who should turn up but Robert O’ Neel. “Hi-i there.” Betty stuttered, “How are you doing?” “Fine, Ms.?” Patrick asked with his deep voice. “Cooper. Elizabeth Cooper. But you can call me Betty.” She replied blushing slightly. “Ah, so then you must be Veronica?” He said turning toward Ronnie. “Yes. Veronica Lodge. But you can call me Ronnie.” Veronica said elbowing Betty out of the way. “Ah. THE Veronica Lodge? Daughter of multi-millionaire Hiram Lodge?” “Yes. That’s dear old Daddykins.” “So nice to meet you.” Robert said his eyes thoughtful as he digested this information. “You girls look like you could use some help. May I?” He asked rolling up his sleeves. “Oh yes. Please help me.” Veronica asked fluttering her eyelashes, “I’m not used to this labor and my li’l ol’ arms are getting very tired. I’m sure you could help with your great big muscles.” Betty inwardly groaned, as she watched them flirt with each other. “Oh well, Blitzen. We all can’t be as rich or beautiful as Veronica Lodge. “Hmph! Betty said stifling a laugh, “I think she’d almost kill anyone who was as pretty and beautiful as she is or thinks she is. “ Betty finished her last reindeer and called back over her shoulder See you later Veronica. I’m going to go find Archie.” Betty listened but heard nothing but a low voice. Probably Robert telling her how he loves her. Betty thought walking through the drifted snow. Oh well at least I’ve Archie. She thought as she wandered toward the glowing lights of the house. I think I’ll check and see how Jughead is doing. “Hi Jughead! How are you do-“ She died off looking at an overstuffed Jughead holding his stomach in a satisfied kind of way. “What on earth happened?” She asked. “Sugar cookies. GOOOD!” Jughead grunted. “How many did you eat?” Betty asked glaring. “He started counting under his breath. When he was up to one hundred Betty left to go find Archie. She walked out into the snow and headed to the doll factory when she spotted a shadow fiddling with some wort of control on the machine of the heating plant “Hey Archie.” She called. The shadow turned toward her jerking wildly away from the machine until finally it broke away and then ran away in between the tables and carts. “Stop!” Betty shouted, “Come back here.” But, the shadow was already gone. It was silent except for the ever playing Christmas music. “Betty! Hi Betty! Do you know where Veronica is?” Reggie asked breaking the quiet as he panted up. “Why no. I thought she already came back with Robert.” Betty asked wonderingly. “Nope, we saw Patrick but not Ronnie. I’m getting worried.” “Hmm.” Betty said, “Have Archie, Round up everyone in the vicinity. You and I are going snooping for clues.”
Ten Minutes Later
Archie found everyone but Ronnie and called an emergency meeting of the North Pole compatriots. “Just in time.” Betty said, as she approached with Reggie at her heels still puzzled. “You all know why I’ve called you here…” She said starting into her speal. “Come on. Hurry up already. We want to find Ronnie.” Archie interrupted, “this will take too long.” “You’re right;” Betty said condescendingly, “Robert kidnapped Ronnie and is also the sabotager.” “What? Not loyal Robert?” interjected Santa. “As you kids say No Way. It can’t be.” “I’m afraid so sir.” Betty replied glaring at Robert. “He was very sneaky but one thing gave him away….his buttons!” The whole room gasped then said in unison confused, “His Buttons??” “Yes. I saw a shadow when I was looking for Archie in the doll factory. Thinking it was Archie, I cried out. I saw the form thus jerk away from the machine and run.” Betty concluded pacing, “I investigated and found one small gold button. Robert had it caught on a control. After discovering that I thought there would probably be a button near everything that had been sabotaged and I was right.” Betty said dumping a handful of perfect gold buttons on the table. “Confess Robert. The court of the North Pole magical creatures might go easy on you. Might!” Santa threatened. “Alright, Alright. I was sabotaging your machines. I kidnapped Veronica Lodge. But I’m not taking the heat alone. St. Patrick bribed me to do this. He wanted St. Patrick’s Day to take the place of Christmas. Veronica Lodge is wrapped up hid behind Rudolph #3.” “Good work Detective Cooper.” Archie gushed, “Now let’s find Ronnie.”

After finding Ronnie and making sure she was alright, they loaded up in the sleigh and headed back to good old Riverdale dozing off to sleep. Landing with a small thud they awoke in Archie’s back yard. They stumbled out. “Well thanks again. You guys really saved Christmas.” Santa said. “It was our (YAWN) pleasure.” Archie answered smiling. “See you later kids. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.” Santa said and sailed into the sky a silhouette against the moon. They could faintly hear HO! HO! HO!“Kind of strange all this it seems like a dream.” Betty said contemplating. “Yeah.” Reggie agreed, “Especially that part where St. Patrick thought he could take over Christmas. Christmas will always be Christmas. It’s all about the birth of Christ and love toward all men. As Will Shakespeare said A Rose by any other name doesn’t smell as sweet. In other words, Christmas is Christmas call it what you like. I’ll see you two in the morning.” Reggie said wandering off. “You know I think he might have learned the real meaning of Christmas after all.” Betty said smiling at Archie.

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santa said archie you need to come with its a emergency the machine on are gift wrapper broke. only you can fix it. why only me? said archie. do you remember when last year you finshed wrapping the gift for betty in a mear f seconds? oh ya know i remember said archie. you have to come and wrap the gifts for the children if you dont there will be no christmas. archie said well allright if its for the kids. he was flying up in the sky.archie looked down at the people on the way there they looked like ants. it was soooooo cold and archies hands were begining to feel numb so santas said i can fix that problem and with a snap of his finger there was a starbucks below. they landed on the roof archie got a nice warm hot chocolate and so did santa. archies hands warmed right up after that. when they got to santas workshop there were allot of puzzeld elves standing around a machine.this must be the gift wrapping machine thought archie. santa said this is archie the one who is going to fix are prblem all the elves were cheering and clapping. archie started to wrap all the gifts it took him at least tweenty minutes. when he was done they elves carried all the gifts onto the sleigh and off they whent finnaly they were done the last house it took such a long time. it was now 1:00 in the morning. when they were heading home archie was thinking about betty then he rememberd. i didn't get her a gift santa said do you need this? he said holding out a box and archie said how do you know? i can read minds thats how i can tell if a persons naughty or nice. in the morning archie walked over to bettys and gave her the gift. it was a diamond ring. when she opend it her mouth was wide open. she gave archie a huge kiss and said thanks arch merry christmas

Part One

Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the house, nothing was stirring, not even a mouse...well, everyone except Archie. He was restless! After a night of festives with Betty, he thought he would fall right asleep. But that was just the opposite of what happened.

Suddenly he heard a loud noise, it sounded like sleigh bells... no, they couldn't be. Archie was too old to believe in Santa, or so he thought. Then he heard a distant voice calling him. "Archie", "Archie", called the mysterious voice. It was getting louder and louder, until something started to pull him. It felt like a hand. It was!

When he finally realized who it was, he was shocked! It was... it was... Santa Claus! But, but, it couldn't be! Or could it? "Ho Ho Hello Archie! My name, as you must already know, is Santa Claus. But just call me Santa for short!" But then all of a sudden, "Whoosh!" Archie was surrounded by, THE NORTH POLE! Then Santa said to him,"Archie, I have a problem! There are so many children and so little toys and time to make them. I need you to make 1295 toys for the chilren of America." "How about you just buy 1295 toys" said Archie. "It will be a lot more simple!" he added. To be continued...

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"Santa’s Helpers"

Written by Leticia
Starring Santa and the gang from Riverdale

December 23, 2007
Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleighbells.

He answered it. “Hello…”

“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up you friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”

“Who is this?” said Archie.

“Santa!”

Archie started to laugh, then heard a noise outside. He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer!

“Well, I’ll be,” mumbled Archie.

Santa looked directly at him and waved. Archie was startled; how did he know that he was looking at him? And from that window?

“Well, are you coming, son?” asked Santa with concern.

“Well…um… ah…”

“I need your help.”

Archie’s good nature told him he shouldn’t ignore his plea. So he ran to his closet, grabbed a pair of pants and said into his cell phone, “Okay, let me call my friends! I’ll see you later.”

Once he changed, he quickly dialed every one of his friends and told them to rush on over.

"Duh, who's the wise-guy calling me so late?"

"Affirmative, Archie. I'm on my way."

“Why? What happened?” cried Jughead.

“Are you okay?” worried, Betty.

Archie told them the same answer, “I’ll tell you later! Please come over as fast as you can!”

And that’s what they all did. They found Archie sitting in a sleigh with a man dressed in a Santa suit. “Uh, what’s the emergency, Arch?” queried Jughead.

“Hop on, kiddies! We haven’t much time!”

They exchanged looks and hesitated to get into the sleigh. “Is he joking?” chuckled Reggie.

Archie was about to reply until Santa cut him off, “If you want that Jok-a-matic kit, you best behave tonight or else it goes to someone else.”

“Sell it on eday,” laughed Jughead.

Reggie grew pale: it was the real Santa! “What do you need us for?”

Santa let out a long sigh. “First things first. We have to capture Morty.”

“Who is Morty?” asked Betty.

“He is an elf gone bad. He wasn’t a very happy elf since he first came to the north pole. I did all I could to make him happy. I gave him a place to stay, a nice job as a toy maker, and free food.”

“Free food?!” slurped Jughead.

Santa let out a chuckle. “Yes.” He then frowned. “Morty tried to kidnap Mrs. Claus but I was able to hide her somewhere else. So Morty made all the elves so sad that they began to cry.”

Reggie snorted. “So what? Just cheer them up and move on.”

“That’s where I need your help.”

“Uh, you are Santa Claus, aren’t you?”

Archie shoved Reggie’s arm and shook his head. Santa paused before he answered, “I tried but I can’t seem to make them laugh. To bring them back to their cheerful self, they need to be cheered up by sweet, innocent kids. And only then, can they continue to finish making the rest of the toys.”

“Don’t worry, Santa,” cheered Betty. “We’ll make them happy again before the deadline.”

“We have to hurry. There’s isn’t much time,” shook Santa’s head.

“And what exactly do we have to do?” asked Veronica.

They made it to the north pole and once inside Santa’s workshop, they all spotted Morty destroying the toys still on the conveyor belts. “There he is!” shouted Santa.

“Duh, I’ll handle him Santa!” cried Moose as he ran his sleeves upward and stomped his way to Morty.

Reggie and Archie ran off along while Santa, Jughead and the girls ran to where the elves were. They entered into a huge room filled with crying elves and puddles of tears on the floor. “How long have they been crying?” questioned Jughead.

Santa looked so sad. “Two weeks.”

“Two Weeks?!” they cried.

“The poor dears!” added Betty.

“Just then in rushed Morty with the guys behind that they accidentally shoved Jughead forward and fall into a huge pot of melted chocolate for homemade candy. Moose stumbled forward and stepped onto a row of feet; Reggie’s, Chuck’s, Veronica’s and even Santa’s foot. “Duh, uh oh!”

“Ow, ho, ho, ho!” cried Santa as he hopped on one foot.

“Ouch! Veronica grabbed her heel and threatened the guys, “Do you know how much these shoes cost me?”

“Hmmm, choooocoooolately!” mumbled Jughead, then dove back down into the chocolate.

Suddenly, they all froze stiff when they heard something loud. The elves were laughing! Archie looked up as he held onto Morty against the floor.

Santa limped forward a few steps and admired the sight of all his little elves happy again. He stretched out his arms and laughed with so much joy before he turned around and thanked Archie and his friends. “Thank you, my friends!”

“You can thank us by leaving us a really--REALLY nice gift under our trees,” winked Reg.

Arch shook his head and said, “No, Reg. Santa, we’re just happy to have helped you. Now all the kids around the world will have their presents.”

“Ho, ho, ho. Thanks to you and your friends.”

As his gratitude, Santa left each of them a special present they all wanted except Reggie. He did get his joke-a-matic kit but he didn’t get the next set. He read the note attached to the gift and read, ‘You’ll get the next set next year if you are good. Santa.”

As for Archie, he got an extra gift. He was puzzled when his father handed him a note that Christmas morning. “Archie, here’s a note for you. It was here on the Christmas tree.”

Archie read it, “Look outside your backyard under the doormat. Then look outside your front street.”

He ran off and did as the note said. “Hmm… keys?” He then ran outside through the front door and was stunned to see a beat up car parked next to the curb. His parents followed and were confused themselves.

“I got an old, beat up car?”

“Looks like it, son,” said his father.

Then Archie was hit by a paper airplane over the head. “Hey!” He grabbed it and noticed the large, bold letters, “The other car in front of this one.”

He looked up and his eyes lit up. It was a cool sports car with his name on the back license plate. “YES!!” He jumped with joy, rushed into the car and drove off for a cruise as his parents smiled and went back inside the house.

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Santa’s Helpers

Written by (Princess)

December 23, 2007

Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleighbells. He answered it.

“Hello…”

“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up you friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”

“Who is this?” said Archie.

“Santa!”

Archie started to laugh, then heard a noise outside. He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer!

So Archie rushing to call his friends Betty,Ronnie,Juggie,Midge,Reggie and Moose.When there gather there Archie said "Friends I need help oops sorry not me is Santa need help !"
Betty can't believe is this world have Santa so Betty said "Where is Santa?"Veronica think that Archie is kidding and just making a joke but is he really making a joke ? Well no he show them where Santa is and said "Santa need help really very important friends ." Betty ask Santa "What do you need us to help you Santa ?"Santa said "Well my reindeer is sick and I need to send all this chrismas presents to the children if they didn't got the present they must be very sad ."Then,Betty said "We can help you to deliver the presents to the children Santa."Santa was really happy when he heard Betty said want to help him .What do we need to do now ?said Midge with exciting with Santa.

Part 2

Santa said "Take this bag inside is the presents for the kids you each have to deliver 1000 presents be fast you all don't have much time !!! Juggie said "Wow!!!if I got 1000 burgers to eat I will deliver the presents very fast Santa . Really,if you I give you 1000 burgers to really deliver the presents for me ? said Santa Jug reply "of ,course if you give me 1000 burgers."No problem said Santa with laughing if Jug really can eat 1000 burgers.With Archie's gangs chrismas is save .

Well now Santa giving Juggie 1000 burgers do you think Jug can eat of course he can but Santa don't believe when Jug eat all the burgers Santa can't believe his eyes that Jug eating the burgers with 10 seconds only but never mind the chrismas is save right ?

Merry Chrismas To Everyone

Hope U All Have A Nice Day At Chrismas !!!!!

WAT DO YOU THINK THE ENDING

HAPPY/SAD

WELL IT HAPPY FOR ME

POST A COMMENT IF YOU THINK THE ENDING IS HAPPY OR SAD TELL ME WHY .

“Oh gosh!” Archie cried in amazement. “Santa!” “Ho ho ho! Yes, it’s me. Round up yer friends sonny! We’ve got lots to do! Ho ho ho!” Rubbing his eyes, Archie tried to make head out of tails what exactly was going on. Throughout his whole childhood as Little Archie, he had believed in Santa, but stopped when fat meanie Billykins laughed at poor Little Archie’s foolishness and Santa Claus. “I must be dreaming. Maybe I should sleep,” Archie muttered. He pinched himself, wondering whether this was all a dream. However, he could still hear Santa laughing outside. Flipping through his phonebook, he tried to call Jughead. “Hey Jug! There’s Santa outside my door,” Archie whispered into the phone. “Archie, two words. YOU CRAZY?!” Jughead shouted. The last thing Jughead needed was Archie saying that he met Santa when it is past 12 midnight. Finally, after much persuasion and “Yes, yes. It’s true. Why should I be crazy?” kind of stuff, the gang met up outside Archie’s home. Before anybody could say anything, Santa called to them.
“You see. The naughty elves from the workshop have stolen some of my gifts AND the list of people and what presents should they get. So, now I need your help. Christmas depends on you. Go to the workshop and familliarise yourself with everything possible and we must get down to chasing the elves. Remember. To catch the elves, you must have something inside you.” Santa explained as he drove the deers towards the workshop.
“Wow...” Betty breathed when they neared the workshop. “Man. That rocks,” Reggie whispered. “Cool, even better than a deluxe burger filled with extra cheese,” you-know-who said. The workshop was filled with elevs bustling about and from the outside you’d think it was the gingerbread house from Hansel and Gretel. Mind you, not Jughead and Ethel. The poor elves struggled to give the finishing touches to some presents. “We need your help. The latest clue we have is that the elves are somewhere nearing London. You think you can help us chase them down and retrieve the presents and the list? I have to stay here to help the elves and my wife is down with snuffling flu and I do feel pretty much ill myself. So what do you say?” Santa asked and took out a big hanky and blew into it. “We’ll help you Santa,” Betty replied in her sweetest voice. Santa nodded gratefully and showed them the sleigh. “Be careful of Rudolph, he’s got a bad cold. Little Jim’s a little aggressive. The rest are real mild as far as I’m concerned.” Soon, the gang was up in the sky chasing down the elves.
Two little green elves caught the sight of the gang. “Ewww... Look at their dressing, horrendous!” Veronica cried in horror. Standing on the Big Ben, the elves laughed maniacally. “Catch us if you can!” They yelled and vanished into thin air. A bright star floated in the sky. “I’ll help you catch the elves,” It boomed. Then, it sailed so fast. The reindeer chased after it on top speed. They landed themselves near the Statue of Liberty in the United States. The elves threw down some presents and vanished... again. The gang caught the presents and were on their way. However, with Rudolph’s snuffling cold, they were thrown off course and soon, lost sight of the North Star. “We’ll never make it back!” Veronica snapped and sobbed. Betty sobbed too. “I need a burger. I’m starved!” Jughead said irritably. Then, Betty remembered something. “Look, Archie. Santa said to catch the elves we’ve got to have something inside us, right? I don’t know what it is, but let’s just hope for the best,” Betty smiled. The sleigh floated on its own and the reindeer seemed surprised too. Finding themselves in Hawaii, they found the elves standing on the sand. They were frozen to the spot. Archie and his gang took their sack of presents and the list. They were about to rejoice when Reggie yelled, “You fools! It’s nearly dawn!” Racing against time, the gang managed to make it back to the workshop. Santa laughed and said, “Children, I guess you’ve found out the meaning of my words! Wishing and believing. Ho ho ho. Thank you so much!” And we’ve that the gang were back in their houses and it was the exact same time when Archie met Santa.
“Is it a dream?” Archie thought as he fell asleep. On the living room floor, there was a gift with the label, “For a very special friend called Archie who saved Christmas.”

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It was so nce and i think it is right, love ones matter more than some gifts, cause you can keep your gifts as long as you like. But your love one will one day die and go. So BE KIND AND LOVE!!!!!!!

Santa’s Helpers Written by (You)
Starring Santa and the gang from Riverdale

December 23, 2007
Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleigh bells. He answered it.
“Hello…”
“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up your friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”
“Who is this?” said Archie.
“Santa!”

Archie started to laugh, then heard a noise outside. He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer! “ i think I’m having a dream still let’s see” Archie hit himself as hard as he could “OW OW” I’m alive so Archie opened the window and said “hey Santa why you in my lawn your too big “ “oh Ho I’m sorry” so he shrank his sleigh then he said” hop on i need help and fast come on come on now the grass shouldn’t start to go “” on my way jolly sir” he ran as fast as he could outside and said “Santa where we going? the NORTH POLE” first some stops and then when they got to the first stop it was a house Archie recognized it was good Betty she was ready to go then Veronica and Jughead ‘how’d you know? Santa told us all first” said Betty” sorry Ho” huffed Santa “what’s the big problem anyway?” “ oh the toys are alive and they attacked me elves they all went to Santa Hospital you can’t see that each day and they almost killed three good lists who we are giving the presents to well them too” “ how’d that happen?” Santa shrugged his shoulders and said “who knows” when they arrived they saw a big palace of names of kids around the whole wide world and lots of sundaes to keep in touch and fresh also there was one thing that kept Veronica happy was the workshop of Santa’s also she saw the biggest nail polish set and she didn’t have it to her she knows no one has it any way when they came inside the room was a mess the elf was on the floor injured the power fuses were out the room was empty and to tell you the truth the toys were all gone but where is the question Santa picked up a little piece of an electric bulb looked at all of the machines which were broken into smithereens’ or something like that then Santa spoke” where are the toy’s?”then they heard noises like little wheels the toy’s came up and attacked the humans with cotton candy every one dodged except for Jughead he started eating any that came in their way or his they didn’t notice that there were tags which were controlling the little toy and if they found out who did this culprit major responsibilities they would be in big trouble but then they started looking for some items to capture them Archie found five nets then passéd them on to Betty and Veronica Jughead and Santa caught there’s they each captured every single one and found the tags and closed them now they had couple more things to do such as make the machines work and then fix the busted after four hours the workshop was spick and span they next went to Santa’s Hospital they soon found out that the elf’s were ok then the whole gang and elf’s went to work they started looking for clues Archie found a feather “hey any of you guys know anyone who has feathers?”” what are you talking about?” asked Veronica ”take a load looks at this!” they all stopped and stared they started thinking then Jughead said “maybe it was someone from Riverdale High!”every one gasped but they knew everyone wants some presents at least as we know it but then Betty spotted the trail was still going on they followed it in tell they were out of the North pole they noticed footprints on the sand it kind of looked like Archie’s footprints but they were not they followed the footprints up to REGGIE this could not be what they saw “ it’s a misunderstanding” then Santa came and said Reggie “why why why?” then he said can i talk to you alone?” “sure” Santa said then he explained that he never got any presents and it is not one percent fair then Santa spoke ”it is because you bully everyone and try to make Archie sad try to steal Veronica punch Jughead I’m seeing this all and Moose is a good boy at heart and you were not on my good list because of all that and years maybe you can change your act maybe there is always next year” Reggie smiled and hugged Santa ‘HOW SWEET” everyone yelled and after that Reggie was an Angel and Christmas was saved three cheers hip hip hooray hip hip hooray hip hip hooray suddenly “ARCHIE ARCHIE WAKE UP IT LOOKS LIKE YOU HAD A GOOD DREAM TODAYS CHRISTMAS””what NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO.”

Maryam K STORY WAS SO COOL.it was soooooooooo cool i liked it so much i read it a 100 times even ok actually 41 times the Tom was the best charcter for me any way she had great ideas i wish i did i wonder if she will win i hope i get the anwser i just loved it it was awsome Maryam k was the best story i ever read her fantastic details her real nice flewency was the added event i cant wait to tell my friends to read it so they will know how cool it was best wishes Fatima

Don't sweat it Hil :) that are what bloggie buddies are for,and besides you totally deserve it **hugs** :D

Hope everyone liked my story. I really liked Archman's even though i don't know who he is. anyone, plz comment!

Anybody like my story ?

A Christmas Tale With Santa

Part1

It was morning , on christmas eve , Archie and Betty were having a stroll around the neighbourhood. Archie was telling Betty about his dream the previous night .

" then Santa said to me - come aboard my boy, I need your help. And with Santa , I saw you and Veronica. then poof , the dream ended abruptly and I woke up with a start . strange , isn't it ? , says Archie .

" I agree with you , well , you never know , dreams may be true ." replies Betty.

"Oh come on , pls dreams can't be true . Anyway , bye , I have to get ready to take Veronica to the dance . " Archie tells Betty and then rushes off

" Well , bye have a good time . Betty sighed . She wished she could be Veronica . These days , Archie was spending more time with Veronica and less time with her .

AT THE DANCE ,

Archie tells Veronica the same story while dancing.

" Betty said that dreams come true but that is nonsense right ?" asks Archie .

" No Archie , Betty is right . Dreams can come true . you never know . replies Veronica .

" Oh come on , you too do not belive in this do you ?"

Soon it was time to go home ,
Archie dropped Veronica home .

" bye ronnie , hoped you enjoyed .

Archie then rode back home .

"How was the dance son ? asked archie's father.

" It was really good pop . Mom i am exhausted . goodnight dad , goodnight mom .

Archie falls into bed and sleeps peacefully.

Part 2

Shortly before midnight ,

trring trring , trring trring

Archie is awakened by his sleep after a few more rings of his cellphone . Instead of the phone beeping , it was jingling !

"who the heck would want to call me so late ? " wondered archie who wanted to get more sleep .

He answered the phone and heard “Hello…”
“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up you friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”
“Who is this?”asked Archie.
“Santa!”
Archie started to laugh, then heard a noise outside. He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer! He saw a stout man wearing a red coat.

" Omigosh , this is for real . I better call up the gang . thought Archie .
He called Midge , Moose , Jughead , Reggie , Veronica , Cheryl , Sabrina ,Betty , Chuck , Nancy, Dilton ,and Ethel
Everyone said ," this better be for real ARCHIE ANDREWS !"
" It is true . believe me . " insisted Archie. He showed them Santa and took them to Santa .
" what happened Santa ? asked the gang
" something serious . The toys are getting missing . It must be Willy wimp -, a rival of mine and who hates Christmas . He is a dangerous criminal- sort of and hates chlidren . without the toys for children, christmas won't be the same . Pls I need your help . " said Santa worridly .
"Of course Santa , lead us the way . said the gang sitting in Santa's sleigh.
"whoo whoo , it was fun riding in Santa's sleigh . The icy cold breeze of wind was hitting their face.
" I told you dreams come true. " teased Betty and Veronica to Archie .

Part 3
"here we are" , said santa at his factory .
"WOWwww ! " said everyone
" santa , santa , Willy wimp is attacking the other dwarfs and elves and is stealing the toys ! , cried a stout little elf who was running up to Santa.
" Oh no , I better lock the safe before he steals more , gang do whatever you can . " says Santa.
Santa goes upstairs to lock the safe .
" Quick , says Archie , Betty, Veronica and Ethel - go down to the basement ,Midge , Cheryl and Sabrina - go to the right side, Jughead , Reggie , and Nancy- to the left and Chuck, Dilton , Moose and I will go up . so start searching WIlly wimp !
The gang go to the different directions archie pointed out .
A few minutes later , the gang meets with no luck of tracing bad Wily wimp.
" Where could he be ? " asks reggie.
" Looking for someone ? ha ha ha ha ! , someone screams.
The gang turns back but are not surprised to see bad Willy wimp.
"C'mon guys , show yur football skills ! Fight ! , the girls shouts.
" Oh no, you will not " Willy wimp cries and makes 8 duplicates of himself. " Ha , you will never beat me " !
" Oh yes we will .C'mon guys show them ! " The girls shout back .
The boys are however much stronger than the duplicates of Willy wimp.
The girls start cheering : Riverdale
Riverdale
Let'er roll
No more duplicates
so....................
GO , GO , GO !
They do many cheers . Sabrina uses magisc to weaken the duplicates . In the end the gang wins !
Just then ,Santa comes down and sees the gang take hold of Willy wimp.
" Well done my friends. I am going to call the time police to take this criminal to Jail." says Santa .
The time police come and take away Willy wimp .
Jughead sees Janruary again.
"Hi Jan , anymore missions ?" askas Jughead.
"not yet , but i fill inform you till then, until then , goodbye my love . replies Janruary and then dissapears with the other police with Willy wimp .
" I am sure i heard that cute red - head teenager say to needlenose , my love ! Am i dreaming . Jughead ,- love ? reggie whispered to Veronica.
" I heard the same , strange isn't it . replies veronica
" Ho HO HO , now you'll will be going in pairs to deliver the toys before dawn . Each pair will have their sleigh pulled by raindeers ! says santa
" lets get started ! , the gang exclaim .
A few hours later , they all meet ,
"Are the toys delivered ?" , santa asks .
"Yes Santa , we're exhausted . Bye . the gang says.
"Ok , merry Christmas . When you reach home each of you'll will find a special gift . bye . says Santa and with a flick of magic , the gang are at home .
The gang were at home . They found santa's gift on their bed for them . They are so exhausted that they then fall asleep .
" What a fun-filled and thrilling night , Yawn! , " archie wondered and then falls asleep .
The next morning ,
" Archie dear wake up " his mom calls out but archie is not able to wake up .
After 2 hours ,
Archie comes down for breakfast sleepily.
" What happened son ? Tell me , not enough sleep ? tell your dad ." his father said .
"you wouldn't belive me if i told you ! archie winked.

AT the park ,
The gang meet and tell each other what they got excitedly .
Sudenly archie asks Betty for a date . Betty accepts and then they go off .
Veronica stares at them and says to the gang , " grr .I just hate them . I should be getting dates all the time . "
" of course you should , you are the spolied one . " says Jughead
" you are right , i am spoli-....... um what did i say ?" veronica snaps suddenly and then gets embarressed .
Everybody laughs .

The End

Santa's little helper,

Oh I saw your story and read it.

Lol oh man i literally laughed out loud when I read the part that Archie thought of calling the police on Santa. LOL!!! I really enjoyed your story too. Oh boy, I can't wait to read what happens next? :O :D

Maryam K,

Wow, good story too! :D And it has a good meaning too. That materialism is not important. Imagine your story in a book? So cool!! :D

Congrats buddies! :D

Keep on writing! :D

Charlese S,

:O Wow... oh my gosh, wow, thank you so much!!! :D Thank you for your kind words. **hugs

I don't know if people appreciate me for sure lol but I've been told very few times. Thank you... I try **blush** I'm glad to help. I can understand how you guys felt. I've felt the same way and well, I wanted to help you guys the best I can. I'm still learning... and my brain is good at lagging, lol, but I try to help. :D

Wow, thanks again! **many hugs.

Santa's little helper,
hey there! :D I hope the rootbeer didn't spill on your keyboard. Yikes!

I hope you and your family have so much fun and a safe trip to Oregon. :D Are you excited to go?

If you guys posted a story I didn't read and comment, I'm sorry. I realized that after my post gets posted, there's others who posted before me and so... well, to make it short, I get confused, lol. So if I didn't comment on your stories and you want me too, please let me know. It's not because I don't want too. It's because I didn't see it. :D

So keep on writing and have fun! :D

Santa’s Helpers Written by (You)
Starring Santa and the gang from Riverdale
December 23, 2007
Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleigh bells. He answered it.
“Hello…”“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up your friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”
“Who is this?” said Archie.
“Santa!”
Archie started to laugh then heard a noise outside.
He got up, ran to the window and looked out. There, on the lawn below was a sleigh… pulled by reindeer!
He saw Santa get up from his sleigh and wave. Archie was so surprised that his mouth opened and hung down for five minutes until Santa said” Well Archie are you going to help me?”
Archie answered” Yes sir Santa I’ll call my friends right away!”As he turned and grabbed the phone he wondered” Is this for real?”
He dialled Betty’s number as quick as he could.
“Hi...Archie? What happend? Why are you calling me in the middle of the night?
“This is no joke” Archie answered.” Come to my house and don’t forget to dress warmly! Santa is here and he needs our help!”
“I’ll be right there!” answered Betty. But as she started to get dressed, she wondered” Is he pulling a prank? I mean get real, Santa? At HIS house?”
Soon as he hung up he dialled his best bud’s number, Jughead.
“Hi, the Jones residence.”
“No time for jokes Jughead, get over here quick and dress warmly. Wait what are you doing in the middle of the night? Wait don’t tell midnight feast?”Said Archie
“How did you guess?” mumbled Jughead.
“Just get over here quick!” yelled Archie and slammed down the phone.
HE went like a rocket as he dialled Ronnie’s number.
“Hey Archiekins how you doing? I just came back from a midnight party it was so boring. “
Veronica come to my house and dress really warmly, got that Ronnie? This is no joke! Oh and don’t tell Reggie I don’t want him to come. He’ll just laugh.”
“Oh dear Archiekins I’ll call him and tell him. You know he’s crazy about me so he’ll listen.”
“Wait don’t---“But Ronnie had already hung up.
“Archie rushed to dress warmly and ran out the door.
When he was outside he saw Santa talking to Betty, Veronica, Reggie, and Jughead.
“What is Reggie doing here? OH yeah” Archie wondered.
“Well I explained why I need their help. Thank you for calling you’re friends.” Said Santa
“No big Santa, but I too need what is going around here.” Said Archie.
As they all hopped on the sleigh, Santa told them that someone or some elf as he thinks, messed up the machines and now the toys can’t be built.
“So what we do, fix the machine?” snickered Reggie.
“Oh don’t be so mean Reggie, don’t worry Santa we’ll help you out!” said Betty.
As they arrived they saw a huge sign that said “Santa’s Workshop”.
As Archie hopped off, so did the rest of the gang. “Now what?” said Veronica.
“Now I’ll show you what to do.” Answered Santa with a jolly smile. As the gang entered the workshop they saw tiny elves running around everywhere with metal parts.
One little elf came up with a tag that said “Tom”. “Santa! The machine is still broken! All the metal parts dont work, what do we do? Christmas will be ruined!” Said Tom as he ran off to join the other helpless elves.
“Why don’t you make the other toys, I mean it won’t matter if one machine is broken you can still make other toys, right?” said Betty trying to look at the bright side.
“I am afraid not Betty, that machine powers up the other machines to build the toys!” sighed Santa.
“Man! I knew i forgot to call somebody!”Archie said as he slapped himself. “I should have called Dilton the genius!”
“Don’t be too harsh on yourself Archiekins.” Said Veronica.
“Ronnie is right, what’s happened, has happened you can’t change it.
Now let’s go out there and save Christmas for the kids! Said Betty.
“Betty, you are in charge of fixing all the doll machines. Veronica you have to fix the clothes machines. Reggie you fix the wrapping machine. Jughead you put the names on the presents and say something sweet on it. Archie you try to fix the power machine, I know it is difficult so I’ll help you. Also the elves will help on Betty’s Reggie’s and Veronica’s job too to make it faster.
“WHAT about helping me and my aching hand with all this writing.” Said Jughead.
“I don’t think you’re hand can hurt for witting nice things Jughead.” Said Santa.
“I guess you’re right Santa, But I can eat something? I am starving!”
“Jughead! I hasn’t even been an hour since you’re midnight feast and you’re already hungry?” asked Archie.
Just then Jughead’s stomach growled really loud.
“YEP, Arch, that is the sign of a hungry stomach!” Said Jughead.
The whole gang laughed including Santa. Then they all set to work. All the elves did everything they could to help Betty, Reggie, Archie and Veronica. Soon Betty and Veronica were done 5 hours later and started to help Archie.
“What about helping me?” asked Reggie
“I’ll help you” said Betty. So she went with Reggie and the elves to help him fix the machine.
4 hours later Reggie was done too so he went with Veronica and Archie. Betty noticed that Jughead had trouble writing fast that she decided to help him. Santa noticed that and jotted down something on his clipboard.
Soon Jughead was done too and everybody was helping Archie fix the power machine.
“Santa! Santa! I know who destroyed the machine!” yelled Archie.
“Who destroyed the power machine?” asked Santa.
“It was Tom! I saw a little evil grin as he ran off. Plus the metal part he had in his hands was a machine breaker tool!!!!! It even had his small elf handprint on the machine!” yelled Archie
Santa looked over at Tom and saw him crying in floods of tears. Santa walked over to Tom and asked “Why did you do this?”
Tom looked up and said “I didn’t mean to!” cried Tom in a little baby voice.
“It’s ok, don’t worry about it Tom.
Tom looked up and smiled. “You are so kind Santa, thank you. You are right what you said to me the first day I came here. At Christmas, the gifts are not important, the love is.”
The whole gang fixed the machine and gave presents trough out Christmas. Just remember at Christmas, you’re love ones are the ones that really matter.
The End.
By: Maryam K

I'm going to Oregon for Christmas to visit the rest of my family sooooo.... I'll see if I can finish my story.Dang! I just spilled rootbeer on my Desk I have to save my advent calender"s! SNAP MY PHONE! oy!HILDA PLEASE COMMENT!!!!

Archie's moutth droppped and there was a small popping noise. SANTA:(Still on the phone.)Archie! Hurry up or else all the children of the world will be dissapointed and stop beliving in me, Please. ARCHIE: O-o-okay ummm.... hold on. Archie was shaking. Calling the police crossed his mind, but then he shook that idea off. What if this guy IS Santa Claus. Archie remembered when he stopped beliving in Santa Claus: It was a snowy day. Icicles lined the top of all the houses. Little Archie was making a snowman. MARY: Ohhh Little Archie.... Comeon sweetie were gooing to go see Santa Today. Archie looked at his mom and smiled at his mom with a toothy smile. LITTLE ARCHIE: At the mall? He asked excitedly, He LOVED seeing Santa at the mall every year. MARY: Yes. LITTLE ARCHIE: YAY!!!!!
20 MINUTES LATER
Little Archie and his father and mother (Mary and Fred) Were wating in line to see Santa Claus. He was next. The little kid in front of him smiled when it was his turn, MALL SANTA: Ho,Ho,HO! And what do you want for Christmas young man? The little kid reached up and pulled the fake beard off. Suddenly, every single little kid in line, including Little Archie and the kid who pulled the fake Santa's beard off started crying. The parents took their little kids home. Little archie was only four when that happened. Archie came back out of his flashback and seized the phone. ARCHIE:Santa hold on a minute, I'll call the gang right now. MEANWHILE:
Betty was getting ready for Veronica's big Christmas party. She was just putting the finishing touches on her outfit when,RINNNNG.RINNNG. BETTY: Hello? ARCHIE: Hey Betty, it's Archie, listen, I need you to call the gang, get them to come over to my house and come in the BACK door. BETTY:Ummm.... Okay we'll be over in a nanosecond. Betty hung up and furiously pounded on the numbers......
WITH ARCHIE:
Archie was outside with Santa now. ARCHIE: So how did this,
And He stopped.
In the Sleigh he saw a girl about ten years of age. Wait..... It's a ELF!!!!
To Be Countinued.........

Maya that story was AWSOME :D

Hilda,you are very nice and helpful.I am sure everybaod apreciates you:)

Jocelyn: I have a cousin named Jocelyn she's about 20 years old and is in her second or third year and is learning about music and is trying to become a singer.Do you have any fav singers?:D;0 :):( Sorry about the faces I like making faces!

that is so cool that u r going to Florida!:)I would probably never get to go because we're being careful with our money because it was just my b-day last week and christmas is coming up and because we're planning on buying a new house.

Shortly before midnight, Archie was awakened by his cell phone – it wasn’t beeping, it was jingling like sleigh bells. He answered it.
“Hello…”
“Archie! I need help. Quick, round up you friends, and dress warm. My sleigh is waiting.”
“Who is this?” said Archie.
“Santa!”
Archie started to laugh then heard a noise outside. He saw a fat over sized man in a red and white suit sitting in a shiny red sleigh pulled by reindeers! He couldn’t believe his eyes! He seized the phone and called the gang. Finally, after ages of waiting for Ronnie, the gang was finally at Archie’s house. They were shocked when they saw Santa Claus. Jughead, as usual, was very hungry. Santa Claus took out a small pretty bottle from his pocket and dropped in on the snow. Immediately, in front of them was hot cocoa. The cups had big golden colored letters that said “SC” for ‘Santa Claus’. The gang gulped down the cocoa faster than you could say ‘phenomenon’. When they finished, the cups disappeared.
“I’m guessing you five teenagers are wondering why you’re here,” boomed Santa. “Well, d-uh!” said Reggie. Santa and the gang glanced at him and Santa continued. “Well, my little elves are sick and I don’t have anyone to help me make, wrap or paint the toys! I need you five to help me, please!” said he. Reggie was still not convinced, “Why can’t you do it all by yourself? I mean, I don’t want to be rude, but, don’t you have magical powers?” asked Reggie. Santa was surprised and a little sad, but he replied: “Well, do you really think that I can finish all the work by myself? Of course not! I’m going to help you all make the work more fun and simple. While your working, I have to find the ingredients for the cure!” Finally, Reggie nodded. Santa reckoned the gang into the sleigh. They climbed up the sleigh they set of, to the North Pole.
After about an hour, they reached the North Pole. They were freezing. They reached Santa Claus’s workshop. The workshop was very colorful and beautiful, but there was nobody there. Santa assigned them their work. “OK, Reggie, Veronica, you two is in charge of making the toys. Betty, you wrap and Archie and Jughead paint the toys. And Archie, don’t mess up. OK, you may begin.” After he said his last word, he went out to look for the ingredients he needs for the cure. Reggie and Veronica made the toys beautifully, and surprisingly, Archie didn’t mess it all up. Betty wrapped the presents like a professional. They finished the job in a jiffy. They may finish up the job, but they made a mess! The workshop looked like it was ransacked and burglarized! Betty and Veronica wiped the tables; Jughead swept the floor for Archie and Reggie to mop the floor. The job was as worse as helping Santa make, paint and wrap the presents put all together! By the time they were finished, they sat on the chairs and dozed off.
When Santa came back, he gently waked them up. They were too tired to do anything. It was already 4 a.m.! Santa brought them back home and gave each of them a special snow-globe with the gang, Santa and the reindeers pulling the sleigh. It was dazzling. THE END.

On that cold night, Santa was waiting. Rudolph's nose was no longer shining red, it was shining white! Of course that would totally not work in the white fog. So he new Archie was a good boy, so he though he could hang Archie;s hair over the white nose, and it would shine through red. All he needed was The Gang to help him.
Before Archie knew it he was suspended over a moving sleigh 50 feet from the ground.

HI!
Just want 2 say Betty is made for Archie! I am wrtting a stroy 2, It's kind of long, hope it makes it!
Heart Maryam!

Crystal,

:D you're welcome and no worries. I understand. Like I told Emily on another post, "No worries. No matter how long one has been writing, everyone needs help along the way, even if it takes years. And there's nothing wrong with that. In fact, it may help a writer grow and learn in the same time. How? It all depends on the capacity of the writer. :D Everyone has their own ways.

Hmm let's try this, let's see if it can help wake up the imagination: ;D

If you look at something for example a park bench, observe it and ask questions. Let's say there's a large tree next to it and its branches are so long that it gives a good shade over the bench.

Hmm... What if Archie sat there and was waiting for someone? Then you notice a man hauling a hot dog cart past the bench... so you imagine Archie sitting on the bench and notices the picture of hot dogs printed on the cart. He gets hungry. So he gets up and orders one while he waits for someone.

That's how you can also build your story. You don't have to use that story but at least it is exercise for your brain. Hopefully it will help you think up a good story for a story starter."

Good luck! :D

If you need more help, don't be afraid to ask. :D I'll keep trying my best to help. :D

Thanks,Sandi!I really appreciate your comment.
~Jasmine~

One cold night Archie lay in bed thinking about how great his date with Veronica had been when, suddenly he heard a noise outside his house
"Who's there?" Archie asked. He got out of bed and looked out the window. What he saw shocked him.
"Oh my gosh!!" He breathed. Outside his window was a giant red sleigh with a fat man in a red suit sitting in the front.
Leading the sleigh were reindeer.
"What are you waiting for Archie get in." The man said. He had a deep voice that was pleasent.
"Exuse me sir," Archie asked as sneeked out his window "Where would I be going if I went into your sleigh?"
"To the North Pole" The man said.
"Are you Santa?" Archie asked
"Why,yes I am." The jolly man said
Archie got into the sleigh.
"Up,up and away." Santa yelled into the night.
The reindeer kicked off into the air. Archie felt his stomach do a flipflop. Faster than you can say Archie comics. The sleigh had landed in the North Pole.
Archie got out of the sliegh and instantly felt the snow below him dissapear and he was falling down a long dark tunnel.
He landed on a trampoline with a hard bounce.
He bounced off just as Santa bounced behind him.
Archie looked around him right in front of his eyes was what must have been 100 elves, all working on toys.
"Sir why have you brought me here?" Archie asked.
"Because I need you to supervise of the loading proceess." Santa said "And please don't call me sir, just Santa is fine."
"What is the loading process sir, I mean Santa?" Archie asked
"It's when the elves put all the toys into the sleigh." Santa replied "I need you to surpervise this process."
"I would be honered Santa." Archie said proudly
"Good" Santa said "I need you to make sure everything is done orderly while I go changr into my suit.
The elves knew the drill. Archie watched as each elf placed a pile of toys in a large brown bag in the bak of Santa's sleigh.
When Santa returned Archie got into the sleigh with Santa and was off. In an instant Archie was outside his window.
"Merry Christmas Santa." Archie said as he climed back through his window, and got into bed.
"Merry Christmas, Archie, and good night." Santa replied as he flew off into the night.

Mikayla,

It's all up to you. :D If you want to write, write. And if you want to, go for it!

And Superteen,
Good luck writing your story and have fun! And awesome advice.

Anyone can be whoever they want. What makes you succeed is the desire, dedication and enjoyment of what you want to do. If you can't enjoy it, then you could have a hard time doing it. If you want to be a teacher, an astronaut, a writer, a doctor... whatever it is, go for it! But remember, do it because you love it.

Good luck every one of you! GO FOR IT! :D

Hilda:

Thanks for helping, but I STILL can't write anything... :(

Can you give me some more pointers, I'm not such a super writer.... T.T

Sandi:

jasmine ur story is so intersting..i really loved it ....

Emily: I loved your story! Especially where Archie learns that he was being rough on them:D Great writing. And Mikayla, you should DEFINITELY write a story. You might be the next great plot writer for Archiecomics:D I think it certainly wouldn't hurt to try. I am working on my story right now.
superteen

Archman,

:D You are very very welcome! :D .. Oh yeah! You have good ideas! I loved the story you wrote and I was wondering what Santa got Reggie, lol!! YES!!! HAHA!

Loved it! :D

Lady Twix, I love your name and the song in your story. Santa Baby is one of my favs:D You have a really great story:-)
Superteen

Should I Write A Story?
Love,
Mikayla